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PMDU - SS - The Witch - Page 33 by StarLynxWish PMDU - SS - The Witch - Page 33 by StarLynxWish
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miflore Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
gosh Astra... why so pretty ? <33333
love the fog effect of the fire ~
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UltimateSassMaster Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013  Student General Artist
A rather odd wording, I'd say! Excuse the writer's critique, but Kara didn't ask for or mention any sort of last name, and in fact I don't think many Pokemon even would have a last name u v u Astra saying "I don't have a last name" is a pretty strange declaration in this matter, I assume you were trying to be dramatic?? But it kinda feels out of place, in my eyes. Last names were only invented to differentiate two different people who had the same name... like "Anderson" would derive from "the son of Anders," and etc. I feel like omitting that phrase would be more appropriate than mentioning it, overall.
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StarLynxWish Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013  Student Digital Artist
//Shrug Probably! It felt a bit too plain to write just "I'm Astra" since I ended up making the last panel look so dynamic, but yeah it's a bit too dramatic for the context I agree! SO YEAH I might change Kara's choice of words or something but yeah! alsothewordingisprettyimportantforlaterbutthat'doesn'tmatternow but Astra isn't THAT uncommon a name so- WELL YEAH EITHER WAY YOURE RIGHT IM STREAMING I GOTTA STOP TALKING HAHA

THANKS FOR THE CRITIQUE
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UltimateSassMaster Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013  Student General Artist
Hahaha well there are more interesting ways to introduce a name! Maybe something like heritage-associated like "Astra, daughter of the blah blah blah," or something mysterious like "All my life, people have screamed names like "freak" and shit, but one name resonated the most of them all, "Astra"" or you know somethin cool. IDK Astra's backstory or anything so whatever lol
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StarLynxWish Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013  Student Digital Artist
LOL THAT WOULD- BE A BIT LONG CONSIDERING THE SITUATION BUT WELL ILL THINK ABOUT IT I GUESS
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UltimateSassMaster Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013  Student General Artist
IDK MAN JUST LIKE
"YO"
"NIGGAS CALL ME ASTRA"
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Wolven-bane Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Astra looks so pretty in the last panel
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Rozanslash Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You totally captured Kara as a female. 0ω0
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